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Nathan Slake's avatar

Fantastic, Alexander. What a climax to part 1! What on earth is going on? Where did Jackie go? Why did Alexander say what he said at the end? The intrigue remains, along with the lacing of some great humour, the moment with the bumbling, obsequious guard especially. (I had the start of The Sandman flicker through my head thinking of a guard guarding something below a house.)

"her footsteps mocking him to follow" was a great line, love this notion.

Well, hurry up with Part 2 then! 😆

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Peter Blasevick's avatar

So fun, enjoying very much.

Als nächstes geht es nach Deutschland? Supergeil!

Also, love the under the radar Monty Python reference.

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