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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"“You’ve unleashed the Talha Ka Ran. The Great Nothing, devouring everything.” “We, uh, didn’t mean to?” said Thorne.

"I shall enjoy killing you – again.” “Yeah, you’re welcome to try…Tentacleman,” Thorne spat.

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Ha ha ha! I loved this story, Ipfelkofer. Even in my mega, psilocybin-induced dreams in 1969, I never conjured up such bizarre scenes. Who IS that woman in the sand? I'll be waiting to find out.

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Nathan Slake's avatar

And thus it ends... [credits...] for now!!

What an action-packed conclusion, Alexander! You did.

Especially loved the part with Taweret, even more so with having seen the opening bit of artwork to set a scene in my head.

"Thorne stood at the bow of a barque, gliding through a dark ocean of sand." -- such a sparse line, but it's rich and vivid.

You also managed to pull in the trademark Carter humour in places too, despite everything that was going on. <3 Bellatrix!

I think I now need to go back and reread it all, to let some of the finer details solidify and with having the arc in my head so some of the things that speak of what's to come can be appreciated given I now know what comes!

Congrats on concluding things. No small feat.

He pressed a button into her hand and whispered something into her ear. -- what did he say?!

Beaumont’s tendrils, like lances, shot forward, piercing Adrian’s chest and lifting him into the air. He howled, then fell silent. Eyes black, he turned to Jackie. -- You do action really well. Tight. (Something I am no good at/never write!)

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