Heh, great continuation. A slight change in style here, I feel, a little more lyrical and poetic and a sense of Carroll coming through, especially in the opening few lines. Bravo, my friend.
Deliciously "icky, sickly and wicked". Full of lethal jabber jabs and jibber jives, clawing claws and beaky beaks. “You do things you don’t want to do for too long, you forget who you truly are. You become the very thing you detest." Ain't it the truth! I see it all around us. Outstanding, Ipfelkofer!
Heh, great continuation. A slight change in style here, I feel, a little more lyrical and poetic and a sense of Carroll coming through, especially in the opening few lines. Bravo, my friend.
Fantastic artwork at the end, too.
What, another animal turned fantastic beast turned rabbit? What’s Mr. Beaver 🦫 doing to them?
Awesome continuation! Will there be more?
Love the rhythmic language and parable-like quality. Great continuation!
A magically poetic little slice of Wonderland, Alexander. Hopefully you can bring us back through the looking glass again soon.
Think I might have spotted a homage to Monty Python and The Hobbit in there as well 🤔😁
Anyway, brilliantly done 👍🏼
The beginning of this certainly has the alliterative bounce of Jabberwocky. Excellent continuation to the story!
Deliciously "icky, sickly and wicked". Full of lethal jabber jabs and jibber jives, clawing claws and beaky beaks. “You do things you don’t want to do for too long, you forget who you truly are. You become the very thing you detest." Ain't it the truth! I see it all around us. Outstanding, Ipfelkofer!