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Oct 11Liked by Shoni, Alexander Ipfelkofer

Haha, this is an awesome ending. So visceral.

You compressed a lot of imagery into so few words. Nice work, Shoni.

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Thanks Nathan, think it's slightly more than 100. That's challenging, isn't it?

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Oct 11Liked by Shoni, Alexander Ipfelkofer

Yeah, I'm always so impressed when people can write a story in 100 words or less.

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For sure! This was a good exercise in conciseness, hey?

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Oct 11Liked by Shoni, Alexander Ipfelkofer

Wow, Shoni, love how you ended this option! 😁🙌

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You gave me a great set-up!

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