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Nov 8Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Ah, liked the tease where we thought Bee was going to get revenge only for the chance to be snatched away. Nicely done Alexander. Looking forward to what comes next 👍🏼

(Hopefully revenge! 😁)

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Revenge is the dish of the day! But how… soon we shall know! Thanks for reading!

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Nov 10Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Agreed, this was really well done!

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Nov 8Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

If this doesn't have a happy ending, filled with good,solid, satisfying revenge, I'm coming for you, Alexander.

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Uh, oh! I better make sure to deliver! ;)

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Nov 9Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Wise choice. Your story is making me feel somewhat homicidal...

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Next Friday, you’ll feel somewhat different ;)

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Nov 10Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

I second and third the sentiments! Revenge or we avenge! lol

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La Revange… isn’t it great when you feel strongly about a story?

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Nov 10Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

🔥❤️

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Nov 10·edited Nov 10Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Excellent instalment, you keep the suspense and momentum going. Ahh the spoon, so close!

Looove the closing line: "And deep beneath the ice, the sleeper awakens." 🙌

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Thanks, Nathan. Yes, the sleeper! Who can guess who that is, or will it be a total surprise for everyone?!

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Nov 10Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

I’m banking on the total surprise. ;)

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