Glad to see another post from you, Alexander! And I love a good loop narrative and the feeling of you have created of vertigo where the edges of one move to the next blur together or disappear all together. Nice work!
Ok, same here! Likely to be only 10% in the next couple of months but I’ll be here when I can. Will always read your stuff eventually :) always enjoy it! Hope you’re doing well.
Great to read this continuation. I love how it ended here. Like Brian, I love a good time loop narrative. I don't know what it all means, but I'm in for the ride.
This is a standout paragraph for me:
The structure on top of the Needle detached with a metallic grind and hung in midair for a moment while the whole tower collapsed, absorbed by the red blobby mass. Then, a pressure wave flattened everything underneath the ship like paper, squeezing the blob so thin that it exploded into a purple mist. With a silent pop, the silver saucer was gone.
Glad to see another post from you, Alexander! And I love a good loop narrative and the feeling of you have created of vertigo where the edges of one move to the next blur together or disappear all together. Nice work!
Thanks Brian! Slowly working my through Groundhog Day ;)
This is a LOT of imagery to take in at 3 : 41 a.m. 😆😲 Still interesting though.....
Thanks a lot, Daniel. Happy you liked it!
Sorry I missed this! You are the kind of dialogue. excited to see the rest...
No worries, Kate. I am still mostly absent, hard at work on part 4 among other things. I shall resume Substack Reading soon! Final touches! ;)
Ok, same here! Likely to be only 10% in the next couple of months but I’ll be here when I can. Will always read your stuff eventually :) always enjoy it! Hope you’re doing well.
And I’m looking forward catching up with yours! :)
Great to read this continuation. I love how it ended here. Like Brian, I love a good time loop narrative. I don't know what it all means, but I'm in for the ride.
This is a standout paragraph for me:
The structure on top of the Needle detached with a metallic grind and hung in midair for a moment while the whole tower collapsed, absorbed by the red blobby mass. Then, a pressure wave flattened everything underneath the ship like paper, squeezing the blob so thin that it exploded into a purple mist. With a silent pop, the silver saucer was gone.
Thanks Nate! In for (a) Penny in for a pound! ;)