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Amazing, Alexander! I imagine Bosso inside the cockpit jamming out to the music, speed floating away from whatever morally heinous work he's conducted.

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Thank you, Ryan! Joe (pod designer) liked the music, too! Bosso... he has it coming!

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Oct 26, 2023Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Props to the music, Miter. Absolutely on point. Gave me certain vibes that remind me of somethingI can't quite put my tongue on right now, but they're 👌👌👌

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thanks Nathan, much appreciated!

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Love this! 🤩

I enjoy the commentary of how you are using characters and changing them from the start. Yea I also do this in scrivener. I have a few things going on I’m scrivener besides the actual narrative. Usually it gets refined and changed a lot a long the way. I can’t write the way you do -- chapter by chapter. I work more in circles eventually arriving at something that I can share.

You have a multimedia hit. Really enjoyed this.

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Thanks, Kate! Much appreciated. I may write chapter by chapter but I do write scenes when they present themselves, which then will be worked into various chapters, not always sequentially and not all scenes survive, and not all those words written will survive either, first drafts need to be trimmed!

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Oct 26, 2023Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

That's one uber fancy pos, very impressive design, video, music, voiceover (of course)!

I love that you do character sheet stuff. I have vague, loose notes written down, but I really should dump more detail from my brain onto the page. Once again: time for me to get Scrivener (I know it has very helpful sections for all this.)

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Thanks, Nathan! Yeah the pod design is tailored towards Bosso. I shared the character sheet with Joe and he read a few chapters. Scrivener is good to keep everything in one place, even if you don’t use everything it has to offer.

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Bosso, more like Bozo. Hah. Punny. He sounds like a real charmer - not! You sure created a character who will be loathed by many - very compelling!

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Loathsome little man! Thanks, Nadia. Every story needs one of those ;)

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True that!

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Oct 26, 2023Liked by Alexander Ipfelkofer

Pod*

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