Thanks, Nathan! So predictable! Silly Carter couldn't see it coming. The carrot dangling is coming to an end... next week when Sam ... oh wait, too soon!
Really enjoyed the great dialogue between the two characters this week, Alexander. Cracked along at a fair pace and was almost an adventure scene in its own right 😁
Hm I think I've gotten used to your snappy & vaguely satirical prose. This was quite enjoyable! I love dialogue, how you can play with it & make it do so many things for the story. Yours was so well-executed in this chapter, I always knew who was speaking & the pacing is great.
Thanks much, Vanessa for sticking with it. Happy you found your way into it. I try to be subtle with the satire, but overall I hope it surfaces often enough. There's almost only dialogue in this chapter/scene/beat and oftentimes creative writing classes will tell you to break it up and esp. in screenwriting, too much dialogue is often a red flag. Need to keep the action moving, the beats beating... so they can discover ... Atlantis? Maybe. Tune in next week for the conclusion! ;)
Well, I was going to say "aliens", but Jackie got there first 😅
Another snappy chapter that continues to dangle the carrot of "what is going to happen?!!"
Already looking forward to next week's instalment!
Thanks, Nathan! So predictable! Silly Carter couldn't see it coming. The carrot dangling is coming to an end... next week when Sam ... oh wait, too soon!
No, wait... come back ... what were you about to say??
😜
They are on a Plane to Germany.
bahaha
Really enjoyed the great dialogue between the two characters this week, Alexander. Cracked along at a fair pace and was almost an adventure scene in its own right 😁
Looking forward to the finale next week 👍🏼
Thanks, Daniel! Always tricky, with only dialogue, might as well be a screenplay, ey? The final curtain draws near!
Glad I can binge this!
Glad you’re enjoying it!
I second Vanessa’s comment regarding your use of dialogue. It’s very nicely executed. Look forward to the next installment.
Thanks Daniel, much appreciated. Conclusion will go live tomorrow!
Hm I think I've gotten used to your snappy & vaguely satirical prose. This was quite enjoyable! I love dialogue, how you can play with it & make it do so many things for the story. Yours was so well-executed in this chapter, I always knew who was speaking & the pacing is great.
Also, my money's on Atlantis. :D
Thanks much, Vanessa for sticking with it. Happy you found your way into it. I try to be subtle with the satire, but overall I hope it surfaces often enough. There's almost only dialogue in this chapter/scene/beat and oftentimes creative writing classes will tell you to break it up and esp. in screenwriting, too much dialogue is often a red flag. Need to keep the action moving, the beats beating... so they can discover ... Atlantis? Maybe. Tune in next week for the conclusion! ;)
Thanks, Nadia. The Greatest Adventure Returns! 😁
Always copy from the Great Adventures to make it so 🤣