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Brian Wilcox's avatar

Alright, here we go, glad to see a post from you Alexander. The tension was stained well throughout the piece and I liked how it shifted from the initial elevated supernatural and universal conflict to the sophomoric tension of a make-out sesh, into the all too human rambling extraction from danger and back to the world-saving energy of the opening. I really want to know more about this Ezekiel character and his inadequacy and potential ineptitude; tough to trust the character to be a mentor that clearly noted he just failed at his life mission but when there is a massive red blob swallowing up your neighborhood, maybe the mystic knows best. Nice work!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Ah, Alexander, either Trevor or Ezekiel could wield the Logic, but we need ANYONE right now "to keep the evil spirits at bay, to drive them back, to banish them for another thousand years." The drive-in theater setting was a bit wacky, but all together, an engaging fantasy.

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