Discussion about this post

User's avatar
Kathleen Clare Waller's avatar

A master of dialogue and intriguing story! Really liked this line -

Her words hung between us like the blade of a guillotine.

Expand full comment
Sergej Klementinovski's avatar

Excellent!

I found it a little difficult at first with so many characters suddenly talking wildly to each other, but the dialogue worked and kept me entertained.

Very nice story with an excellent twist. Many thanks for that!

Expand full comment
14 more comments...

No posts